Enjoy this lovely poem from a guest poet. So happy our writing community is expanding. Like Evelyn’s work? I’m sure she’d love to hear it. Leave a comment below.
My Perfect Dream
The sun rises over the mountains
the clouds rise up from the ocean
a dream come true
The forest sparkles in the light
the sunset as pretty as the rise
spring, summer, fall, winter
Green grass
the hot sun
falling leaves
the sparkly snow flakes
all my hopes are here
The birds are chirping
as they circle the sky
they can fly but why can’t I?
Fall is my favorite
Winter next
Summer, Spring
then Fall again
The water shines as
bright as the sun
earth, air, fire and water
that’s my dream come true.
July 16, 2015
By Evelyn Swan
Age 7
Claire Dreessen said:
The sensitivity and depth of Evie is to be cherished as the gift she is.
Aunt Claire
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Uncle Mike said:
Looks like somebody is entering one of the family trades. Keep it up!
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markporteous said:
Evie that is a beautiful poem!
I feel your awe and gratitude for all of life.
You are a beacon of light in the world. Keep shining brightly.
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Jen daly said:
Evelyn,
Your poem was lovely! Keep up the fantastic work!! Lots of love, Aunt jen
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Ellen musser said:
Evie, That is touching my heart. Loving your poetry and you.
Cousin Ellen
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Kaweah said:
Your poem is beautiful! I LOVE it!
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Annabell O'Connor said:
What a gloriously beautiful poem, I can picture myself right there with you, sharing your dreams. We love you so much!
Nic & Anna
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Mary said:
Through your words, I could really see the forest sparkle and I always wondered why birds could fly but I couldn’t. Fall is my favorite time of year too. Your poem made my day! Thank-you and keep writing!
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Joan said:
How wonderful! Straight from your beautiful heart. Please continue to write and express yourself in all the ways you can…your art is as strong and lovely as you are. It is a pleasure to be getting to know you.
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jdreessen said:
Evie, what a beautiful poem, your spirit is so strong….i feel i want to share your dream. I am, as always, so proud of you…..
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Kay Churchill said:
Dear Evie- your beautiful poem brought me a smile. I am so proud of you and wish I could give you a HUG! We know you are the best hugger ever! I miss you and your poem will be with me all day and everyday.
I love you.
Tante Kay
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Gina said:
Beautiful! I can feel myself in the cool, crisp, scintillating outdoors as I read this poem! What a great end to my office enclosed day!
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kartwheels said:
Reblogged this on Kartwheels.
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kartwheels said:
Evelyn, Your spirit comes out so clearly in your poetry. I am proud of you! Keep writing!
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Anna said:
This was SO beautifully done! I love it!
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